You have completed good research into similar products and your target audience, and your product is well-planned. To improve further include more detailed analysis of similar products, and more detailed draft work.
Production 45/60 (B)
Your magazine is well-suited to your target audience and makes good use of font and colour. Your images make good use of mise-en-scene and are clearly relevant to your magazine. To improve further try to fill the empty space on the left hanfd side of your front cover. Use more varied fonts on your contents page. It would be better to use a different set of images on the contents page (and to make use of a variety of shot types). Consider using a different font for your pull-quote on the double page spread.
Research and Planning 15/20 (B)
ReplyDeleteYou have completed good research into similar products and your target audience, and your product is well-planned. To improve further include more detailed analysis of similar products, and more detailed draft work.
Production 45/60 (B)
Your magazine is well-suited to your target audience and makes good use of font and colour. Your images make good use of mise-en-scene and are clearly relevant to your magazine. To improve further try to fill the empty space on the left hanfd side of your front cover. Use more varied fonts on your contents page. It would be better to use a different set of images on the contents page (and to make use of a variety of shot types). Consider using a different font for your pull-quote on the double page spread.