You have completed good research into similar products and the target audience. Sound draft work and organisation is also evident.
To improve further include more detailed explanation of the effect of production choices in your analysis of similar products. Include evidence of drafting as you go through the stages of production.
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ReplyDeleteYou have completed good research into similar products and the target audience. Sound draft work and organisation is also evident.
To improve further include more detailed explanation of the effect of production choices in your analysis of similar products. Include evidence of drafting as you go through the stages of production.